Rust presentation review


Hello Rust Community.
Soon I will have conference talk in our amazing country - Armenia
Conference link - here
It would be really cool if you guys can review my draft.
You can find the draft here
Slides here
Please feel free to left any comments about it!


Found a typo: the name of the os is Redox (not Radox).


Fixed. Thank you :+1:


Good luck with the presentation! :slight_smile:

But, The draft URL is not valid.


Updated. Thanks for the note.