Rust presentation review


#1

Hello Rust Community.
Soon I will have conference talk in our amazing country - Armenia
Conference link - here
It would be really cool if you guys can review my draft.
You can find the draft here
Please feel free to left any comments about it!
Thanks.


#2

Found a typo: the name of the os is Redox (not Radox).


#4

Fixed. Thank you :+1: